Tuesday 21 May 2019
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Hi Josh, I really like your story! What was the voyage like? How did Jorge feel when he got on the boat, and when he arrived in New Zealand?
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O Im jorge so u meant me ummmmmm The Voyage was pretty bad until I migrated myself to New Zealand XD
DeleteNice Joshua! I like how you told it and described it . You could improve on your vocabulary and specifying more on the story .
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